More changes

This is our most recent draft of 'When The Tide Comes In' we made some changes after another set of feedback to: 

• Stop the lyrics coming in too early after the narration at the beginning
• Get rid of the blurry time lapse videos
• Too many sparklers scenes (Didn't add to the plot)
• Take out the real life dialogue from the car scene and replace it with a montage of argument
• Put the distressed shot of Lily at the end between the end cards
• Add it text cards explaining the story more 
• Get rid of swearing as the trailer for a 15 would be rated a 12 so wouldn't have swearing